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    Destiny calls

    Okay,

    I'm gonna send my Zelda fic through the media boards, kay? But that's only because I sent my last BoF fic here. Misstress Weiila, I'll be sending you my BoF fic later probably next month. I'll start sending it in later, kay everyone.

    Now, if you remember, I had names that nobody will know until I start the fic. Keep in mind, this story is a fanfiction, so things will be off a little from the game. BUt bare with me. I'll send it to you guys later. Here is the thread it'll be on.

    p.s. Misstress Weiila, I'm going to post it instead of sending this one to you. I wanno what people think I should fix. Thankies! expect my BoF fic in soon though!
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    What game is this one about again, CC?

    In any case, we certainly await it, and will help you with it! Thank you!
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    It is of Zelda; Ocarina of Time.
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    *sips tea* No rush Chris...
    ... though you should be whacking me by now for taking so long :P
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    I'm used to waiting. It's like I'm eternally waiting, sometimes. ... I also think that karma hates me, so I could be wrong. Meh. :P

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    While you guys are waiting, I though I'd give a little hint on what it's like....

    "NO, I swear don't kill ME!" screamed the criminal.

    "Hmph, since when did I kill you?! I'm only gonna take your life out of your body and your soul will be mine!" Chris yelled. The fourteen year old brought his sword against the killers neck. The point was piercing his skin. Just before Chris could strike, someone yelled from behind him.

    "Chris! Don't!" Chris turned around to see Leon running up and drawing out his own sword.

    "Why not?! He killed all those people, he deserve to die!" Chris yelled angrily not moving his sword.

    "Brother, I ask of you to put down your sword and listen," Leon waited until Chris' sword was away from the mans neck. "Listen kid,....

    That's all I'm going to give to you. You'll be surprised of who everyone is. I don't want to spoil anything and I think i gave to big of a spoiler for you guys. Expect this to be good. Though, Chris may seem a little cold...
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    Fourteen year old prepared to kill and take souls, whoa... on the other hand, how old was Link, he was sixteen in Zelda II if I remember correctly :-)
    Looking interesting, Chris, just a few pointers:
    "befor<u>e</u>"
    "some yelled from behind him" sounds a little better.
    And "He killed all those people he should deserve to die!", a bit of rephrasing maybe... I recommend "He killed all those people, he deserves to die!"
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    Okay! My sa go and correct those now!

    You know what. Because you brought that question up...I can't keep it from you guys. Link is 10 at the begining of the story. Now, I've twisted the series up a little bit so,ets just say Link isn't the only hero of time. He has younger brothers, one is an orphan. Chris here, is a 5 year kid who Link and Saria found one day in the lost woods alone. Though he is not the blood line of the Hero of Time, Destiny still has plans ffor our little friend. A Bad destiny should I say. One that will strike fear in everyone's hearts.
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    Alpha-Female of the RPGC Staff Weiila's Avatar
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    Oi, that sounds like it'll be painful... ^_^;;
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    Cool

    Okay,

    I'll be sending chapter one in soon. That is all.
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    Destiny call's chapter one

    Yay! It's here! Opps... *looks above post* Sorry for the double posting ^^;;

    YAYA!! It's here! I think all the mistakes have been corrected. If not, tell me! ^_~
    Destiny call's

    Chapter one: Chris, Link and Dart
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    "Hang on Chris! Just stay there and don't move!" Link yelled to a little boy who was hanging on the edge of the Great Deku Trees' top floor. Link had to think quickily otherwise his little brother was going to die.

    "Hurry! I can't hang on any longer!" the little boy shouted. His fingers were slipping and Chris rised his other hand to the edge. His gauntlets were slipping off his fingures.

    "Dart?! What are you doing?!" Link yelled at his other brother who seemed to be distracted by a creature that looked like a sipder only it had two large legs and one huge, red eye.

    "He came up from behind! I can't help right now!" Dart yelled as he held his sword up to keep the creature from eating his face off. Link sighed as he turned back to his little brother.

    "Chris, hang on for just another second, okay!" Link said to Chris.

    "Easy for you to say! Just hurry!" Chris panicked. He was about to fall and it wasn't going to be a soft landing. Chris gulped and looked past his sholder towards the ground. His face turned purple as he looked at what could be the end for him. Chris shut his eyes and yelled once again. "LINK!" Navi flew down to the hanging child.

    "Keep calm Chris, Link's on his way!" the fairy tried to calm the young boy down but he still panicked. Chris looked behind himself to see a vine hanging from the top of the ceiling. He had an idea.

    "Navi, fly to that vine and bring it to me!" Chris told her. The fairy turned to the vine and flew towards it. She graved the vine and gave it to Chris. His right hand letched onto it as his left held onto the edge. "Here goes nothing!" he said as he closed his eyes once again and graved the rope like plant with his other hand and swinged to the other side of the room. "AHH!" the boy screamed as he swung back and forth.

    "Chris?! What are you doing?!" Link noticed Chris swinging back and forth on a vine.

    "HELP!" the child yelled again.

    "Try swinging to me Chris! I'll catch you!" Link told him. Chris swallowed his fear and begun to swing harder. When he was in Link's reach, he let go of the vine flying into his older brother's arms. The two fell to the ground laughing. "Don't ever do that again kid!" Link told Chris.

    "Sorry... I slipped..." Chris said.

    "A little help would be useful right about now..." Dart said as he still fought back aganist the two legged monster. Link stood up and pulled out his Kokiri sword that he had gotten from a maze in the Kokiri forest before he came into the Great Deku tree. Navi flew to the creature to guide Link through the battle.

    "This is a Gohma Larvae... becarful when they charge!" Navi told Link. The Larvae once again charged onto Dart's blade, giving him another red glare.

    "You... could've... told me that... eariler..." Dart said as he pushed back on his blade. His bare hand began to hurt by the sword's edge as the Larvae threatned to break through his blade. Link ran up from behind and slashed the creature two times in the back. After the creature had died due to Link's sword, it fell onto Dart. "Eack! Get this thing of of me!" Dart yelled as he scarmbled from under the Larvae. Dart threw it off of himself and stood up in disgust. The two boys placed their swords back into their sheaths and looked at each other. Chris was looking over the edge of the top floor of the dungeon and smiled as he thought of a crazy idea. Link happen to notice the smile.

    "You ain't thinking about it are you kid?" Link asked him. Chris looked at Link.

    "I know how we can get down to the next floor!" Chris told them. Navi looked over his head and saw the huge spiderwed that led to the bottom.

    "Good idea Chris!" Navi stated. Link walked to the edge and thought of the same idea.

    "Alright, on my count... 1... 2... 3!" Link shouted as the three boys jumped off the edge. They went through the strong web and landed in water. They came up and swam to the nearby land. Chris started to dry out his silver hair as Link and Dart came to the land.

    "Well, we certainly are in the basement..." Dart said as Link slashed a plant creature known as a Deku Baba. The Deku Baba had a vine like body with a head full of teeth.

    "Good thinking kid! Now, let's find the soruce of the Deku tree's troubles!" Link said happily as Chris shook himself dry. The young boy smiled at his brother. "Dart, hand me a Deku stick, well ya'?" Link asked as he turned to a cobweb blocking a hidden door.

    "Ahhh, did you try your sword?" Dart asked as he handed Link a stick. Link slashed the web so his brother would believe him.

    "Yeah, and just like the one above, it is a very strong web that only a Big Skullwalltula could build." Link told him. A Big Skullwalltua was a huge spider with a hard body but a weak back. These kind of spiders could be found almost anywhere. The young hero looked for a torch, he found one and lit the stick. Then he ran back to the cobweb. The web burned and a door showed in its place. Link opened the door and walked in followed by Chris and Dart.

    Link looked above his head and saw egg sacks on the ceiling.
    "Look out..." he said calmly as the eggs hatched and three other larvaes dropped to the ground. Link and Dart pulled out their swords as Chris put up his fists. His gaunlets tightned as he clenched his fists tighter.

    The three babies charged at the three boys. Link moved to his right as Dart used his shield. Chris brought his fist to a criss-cross defence formation as his target apporached. Link slashed the young opponent. Dart deflected the charging Gohma and slashed his target. Chris was hit but still in defence. The young warrior punch hard into the Larvaes body, causing pain through out its ribs. The creature shrieked in horrer as Link slashed it.

    "Great job you two. Very immpressive." Link told them as he put away his sword. Dart and Chris smiled in pride as they too relaxed from a short battle. Link walked to another cobweb blocking yet another door. "Your turn, Dart." he said. Dart pulled out a deku stick and walked to a troch, he lit the stick and ran back to the web. The sticky material went up in flames, turning into ashes within a few seconds. "Looks like we're going to have to crawl... Okay, I'll meet you on the other side..." Link said as he crawled into a hole in the wall. After a few minutes, Dart crawled through. After him, Chris quickly slipped to the next room.

    When Chris stood up, he noticed they were back in the room of the where they fell into. He saw another gaint cobweb in the floor. "Can I have the honor?" Chris looked at his older brother. Link nodded as Chris jumped up and pulled his pony tail back to place. The child walked ontop of the web and placed his hands in front of his face.

    After a minute, Chris yelled and threw his fist into the web, then, he fell through. The young boy fell until he landed in a pool of water. "It's alright! I'm okay!" he yelled up to his brothers. Chris swam to land and waited for his sibilings before going into the next room. There, he was attacked by three plant like creatures that lived under ground, known as Deku Scrubs. They spited a type of coconut at him. Chris ran back into the water to avoid being hit.

    Link and Dart jumped down and landed in the water as well. They swam out of the water. Link pulled out his shield as he prepared to dodge the deku nets of the Deku Scrubs. They seemed to be protecting the next area.

    "2... 3... 1. Twenty-three is number one." Link said as he remember a code that he had learned eariler. The defending boy countered the nuts and hit the first deku scrub. After a little chat the scrubs left the boys. Link pulled out the sling shot and fired at the eye above the door. The door opened and the three brothers bravely stepped into the next room.

    I hope it looks better. I hope I didn't miss anything. Mistress weiila, did I miss anything? How about the rest of you? Anything caught your eye please please tell me!
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    Story is pretty good so far. Keep it up Chris ^_^
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    Than you! Chapter two will be in later this week or whenever I have time.
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    Looks good CC, I skimmed it through now (have to head off for work training soon :P), will check more closely in the evening, tay? Damn my lack of time, hm? :/ I'm sorry.



    EDIT: Okay, here we go. And don't worry about double posting, it's okay on this board when it comes to posting works and submissions. :-)


    "Hang on Chris! Just stay there and don't move!" Link yelled to a little boy who was hanging on the edge of the Great Deku Trees' top floor. Link had to think quickily otherwise his little brother was about to die.

    >Preferably "was going to die". Saying "about to die" sounds more like he's already broken every bone in his body and is fading away.

    "Hurry! I can't hang on any longer!" the little boy shouted. His fingures were slipping and Chris scarmpled his other hand to the edge. His gauntlets were slipping off his fingures.

    >Fingers and... what's scarmpled?

    "Dart?! What are you doing?!" Link yelled at his other brother who seemed to be distracted by a creature.

    "He came up from behind! I can't help right now!" Dart yelled as he held his sword up to keep the creature from eating his face off. Link sighed as he turned back to his little brother.

    >Describe the creature better, otherwise it could be a fox, slime, spider, vampire, goblin, lamb, frog, dark knight, Ultros (yes I ran out of ideas and started looking at the smilies :)). And where it came from.

    "Chris, hang on for just another second, okay!" Link told Chris.

    >Is "told" the word you want? It sounds like it's said in a calm tone, but that might just be me.

    "Easy for you to say! Just hurry!" Chris panic. He was about to fall and there wasn't going to be a soft landing.

    >"panicked" and "It wasn't..."

    Chris gulped and looked past his sholder towards the ground. His face turned purple as he looked at what could be the end for him. Chris shut his eyes and yelled once again. "LINK!" Navi flew down to him.

    >The last "him" is a little fuzzy. Since Chris shouts for Link just before, it kinda sounds like Navi is flying to the hero. Don't write "Chris" again there though, use "hanging boy" or something like that or there'll be repetitions.

    "Keep calm Chris, Links on his way!" the fairy tried to calm the young boy down but he still panic. Chris looked behind himself to see a vine hanging from the top. Chris had an idea.

    >"Link's", and watch it with the calms and Chrises there. The top of what? The tree? Then write that out too :-)


    "Navi, fly to that vine and bring it to me!" Chris told her. The fairy turned to the vine and flew towards it. She graved the vine and gave it to Chris. His right hand letched onto it as his left held onto the edge. "Here goes nothing!" Chris said as he closed his eyes once again and graved the vine with his other hand and swinged to the other side of the room. "AHH!" he screamed as he swung back and forth.

    >Vine vine vine vinety viner vine...

    "Chris?! What are you doing?!" Link noticed Chris swinging back and forth on a vine.

    "HELP!" the child yelled again.

    "Try swinging to me Chris! I'll catch you!" Link told him. Chris swallowed his fear and begun to swing harder. When he was in Links reach, he let go of the vine flying into Links arms. The two fell to the ground laughing. "Don't ever do that again kid!" Link told Chris.

    >Link's. And REALLY watch it with the names in that paragraph. Metaphors are gold :-)

    "Sorry... I slip..." Chris said.

    >slipped?

    "A little help would be useful right about now..." Dart said as he still fought back aganist the creature. Link stode up and pulled out his Kokiri sword that he had just gotten. Navi flew to the creature to guide Link through the battle.

    >"stood". And again, what kind of creature is this? And "that he had just gotten"... how, where, when, who?

    "This is a Gohma Larvae... becarful when they charge!" Navi told Link.

    >Ah, okay. Got a name. But how does it look? Place that description primary in the beginning, then you can add more details if you need to as you go along, like wild eyes shifting between the warriors and such.

    "You... could've... told me that... eariler..." Dart said as he pushed back on his blade. His bare hand began to hurt by the sword's edge as the Larvae pushed on the young boy.

    >"pushed" in two sentences.

    Link ran up from behind and slashed the creature two times.

    >Where?

    After the creature was attacked, it fell onto Dart.

    >As an attack of its own or was it dead? Say so at once preferrably to avoid confusion.

    "Eack! Get this thing of of me!" Dart yelled as he scarmpled from the dead two-leged spider.

    >do you mean "scrambled"? And as I said with descriptions already, have it earlier.

    Dart threw it off of himslef and stode up in disgust.

    >himself and stood.

    The two boys placed their swords back into their cases and looked at each other.

    >I think you mean sheaths about the swords' placement.

    Chris was looking over the edge and smiled as he thought of a crazy idea. Link happen to notice the smile.

    >The edge of what?

    "You ani't thinking about it are you kid?" Link asked him. Chris looked at Link.

    >ain't

    "I know how we can get down to the basement!" Chris told them. Navi looked over his head and saw the huge spiderwed that led to the basement.

    >What basement?

    "Good idea Chris!" Navi stated. Link walked to the edge and thought of the same idea.

    "Alright, on my count... 1... 2... 3!" Link shouted as the three boys jumped off the edge. They went through the strong web and landed in water. They came up and swam to the nearby land. Chris started to dry out his silver hair as Link and Dart came to the land.

    >Water and land in a basement? Call the plumber! :hmm: "I'm-a here!"

    "Well, we certainly are in the basement..." Dart said as Link slashed a plant creature known as a Deku Baba.

    >A what? Describe it.

    "Good thinking kid! Now, lets figure a way to get to the boss!" Link said happily as Chris shooked himself dry.

    >Don't have characters speak as if they knew they are in a videogame unless it's a humoristic story. It doesn't sound believeable for somebody to run around shouting "Let's get to the final level and fight the last boss!" in a story. Write something like "the leading monster" or the like.
    And "shook"

    The young boy smiled at his brother. "Dart, hand me a Deku stick, well ya'?" Link
    asked as he turned to a cob web blocking a hidden door.

    "Ahhh, did you try your sword?" Dart asked as he handed Link a stick.

    "Yeah, and just like the one above, it is a very strong web that only a Big Skullwalltula could build."

    >When did he do that? And what's a Big Skullwalltula? Sounds like a mutant flower to me...

    Link told him. He looked for a toruch. Link found a toruch and walked to it. He lit the stick and
    ran back to the cobweb. The web burned and a door showed in its place. Link opened the door and walked in followed by Chris and Dart.

    >"torch". And look at the sentences there. They all have about the same length and are built up in pretty much the same way. You could combine them into a couple of longer sentences with commas instead of periods to help this off a bit. It sounds a bit chop-chop-chop as it is now.


    Link looked above his head and saw egg sacks on the ceiling.
    "Look out..." he said calmly as the eggs hatched and three more larvaes dropped to the ground.

    >Three more? Did they fight these before?

    Link and Dart pulled out their swords as Chris put up his fist. Chris's gaulents tightned as he clintched his fist tighter.

    >Repeating Chris again. And "fists" (I'm guessing), "gauntlets", "clenched".

    The three babies charged at the three boys. Link moved to his right as Dart used his sheild.

    >"shield"

    Chris brought his fist to a criss-cross defence formation. Link slashed the young appointent. Dart deflected the charged and slashed his target. Chris was hit but still in defence.

    >Sentences are built up like "Name, action, attack/cause". Look that over. And I think you mean "opponent". What charge does Dart deflect? Is that "the charging monster"

    The young warrior punch hard into the Larvaes body, causing pain through out its ribs. The creature shrieked in harrior as Link slashed it.

    >harrior? What's that?

    "Great job you two. Very immpressive." Link told them as he put away his sword. Dart and Chris smiled in pride as they too relaxed from a small battle.

    >"short battle", preferably.

    Link walked to another cobweb blocking yet another door. "Your turn, Dart." he said. Dart pulled out a deku stick and walked to a trouche, he lite the stick and ran back to the web. The web went up in flames and turned to ashes in a few seconds.

    >"torch", "lit". And watch it with repeating "and" and "the web".

    "Looks like we're going to have to crawl... Okay, I'll meet you on the other side..." Link said as he crawled into a hole in the wall. After a few minutes, Dart crawled through. After him, Chris crawled quickly to the next room.

    >They crawl a lot here...

    When Chris stode up, he noticed they were back in the room of the gaint cobweb. He saw another gaint cobweb in the floor.

    >A lot of "giant cobwebs" too. "stood", and "were back..."? When were they there?

    "Can I have the honor?" Chris looked a Link. Link nodded as Chris jumped up and pulled his pony tail back to place. The child walked onop of the web and palced his hands in front of his face.

    >Don't write Link two times in a row. What do you mean with "onop of the web"? "placed"

    After a minute, Chris yelled and threw his fist into the web, then, he fell through. Chris fell until he landed in a pool of water. "It's alright! I'm okay!" he yelled up to his brothers. Chris swam to land and waited for his sibilings befor going into the next room.
    Link and Dart jumped down and landed in the water as well. They swam up to Chris. Link pulled out his sheild as he prepaired to dodge the deku nets of the Deku Scrubs. There were three
    in the room who seemed to be protecting the next area.

    >What're "deku nets" and "Deku Scrubs"? "before", "shield", "prepared". And wouldn't the monsters have attacked Chris while he was alone? Look over that paragraph for repititions too.

    "2... 3... 1. Twenty-three is number one." Link said as he countered the nuts and hit the first deku scrub. After all three scrubs left them,

    >What? They just left and walked away peacefully? What happened there, and what was Link counting?

    Link pulled out the sling shot and fired at the one above the door.

    >The one what above the door?

    The door opened and the three brothers bravely stepped into the next room.


    There we are. It's a cute story, but it needs some more brushing up :-) Good luck writing!

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    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


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    Okay Mistress weiila, I'll go back and correct it later. Thank you!
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    No problem :-)
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    okay! Fixed!:D
    Boogey Dancing: http://www.drunkduck.com/Boogey_Danc...dex.php?p=4455

    Yes, I finally have a webcomic. Read it if you like.

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    Chris-chris sorry it's taking so long. I promise to have a lot of chapters in later. My desk is giving me trouble, so, It'll be a while.
    Boogey Dancing: http://www.drunkduck.com/Boogey_Danc...dex.php?p=4455

    Yes, I finally have a webcomic. Read it if you like.

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    Alpha-Female of the RPGC Staff Weiila's Avatar
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    Take the time you need, Chris-Chris :-)

    Oh, and by the way, where's that dragon in your avatar from? It looks neat. Just curious :)
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    Object of the Perpositional Phrase Chris-chris's Avatar
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    Orakio made it for me. We had a little practice match and I transformed into a dragon. I won't say how the match ended. ;)
    Boogey Dancing: http://www.drunkduck.com/Boogey_Danc...dex.php?p=4455

    Yes, I finally have a webcomic. Read it if you like.

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    Alpha-Female of the RPGC Staff Weiila's Avatar
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    Orakio: Dancing with the Dragons... :)
    New fanfic quote:

    "I am indeed a spy, milord, but not for the enemies of Mordor or the Master. Instead, I serve a different master, a group called the Protectors of the Plot Continuum. Milord, have you ever heard of 'fanfiction'?"
    "Aye. A particularly odious form of sorcery, by all accounts."
    /.../
    "Yes. And have you heard of 'fangirls'?"
    "They are but a legend! A fearful legend, but a legend nonetheless."
    -Architeuthis of the Protectors of the Plot Continuum and High Nazgul of the Ringwraiths
    From "Intelligence Briefs for the PPC: The Beginning" by Architeuthis


    Quote Originally Posted by darkling
    Orochimaru has joined the Baby-Sitter's Club.

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    Time Dragon: *snorts*
    Myrrine: *asleep*
    I really wish you wouldn't do that. *sighs*

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