Welcome to the media board. Please let us see your work and give you some constructive critism if you want some help.
Oh, and...

"U R BAND RAAAAAARLOLOLOLZNARF!"
"This stuff is awful. That is all."
"LEARN TO SPELL YOU DAMN LOSRE!"
"Give it up, you'll never get good at it. Sucker."
"I wouldn't want the Zelda games fucked up in a fanfic by the likes of you."

<big><b>These are a few things that I will <I>NOT</I> tolerate on this board. I hope that that is understood.</big></b> If SG or I sees anything like this here, we WILL take action. This board is a place for artists to meet artists and senseless and unprovoked flames will not be looked highly upon.

Thank you.

Sorcerer already made a good rant about constructive critisism, which you can find here:

http://agora.rpgclassics.com/showthr...&threadid=9417