Dragons and Demons

[Chris-chris]

Oaky, I have some of the fixed version and I still have the beta read copies from Weiila. So thats one good thing.

Another good thing is that I was on the last chapter befor the site went down. Heres a question, should I continue from the last chapter or do you guys want me to start over with the first chapter?

I don't want to send anything in til I get at least three people who have replaied to my story. I know that Weiila made a moderset proposele to us but, I need to know if you guys want me to start with the last chapter or not. Kay? I know three poeple who have sent a replaiy to me and sorry Weiila, you don't count as one of them...

[Frameskip]

I didn't get a chance to read it.:( So it would be nice for you to repost it at least.

[Weiila]

Yeah, repost all of it, Chris. It makes it easier for new readers to follow :-)

[Manus Dei]

I think the same way.

[Chris-chris]

Oaky. I'll start with chapter one just for you Frame. But not during the week, high school exams are all week so, I'll have some in this weekend. Make sure you get it this time! If I have too, I'll get Weiila to sticky it!:o

So, be sure to read it this time through!:p

More on this later, Sorry Poke, and all the others... you'll have to wait for the last chapter. But while your on the cliffhanger, do you want anything? Popcorn?

[pokefreak_85]

Popcorn?

I'd rather want the next chapter. :p

But popcorn will do too. :)

[Seraphim Ephyon]

You might want to take a look at that fic she has on her sig on the meantime. I know Urza since he was on a stupid RPG I made and got frozen when my computer blew up, he's a very interesting guy and the fic rocks.

[Chris-chris]

Okay, I migtht have a couple of chapters in this weekend... it depends if I still have energy after the exams.:(

Weiila, can I have this stickyd for a short while? I don't know when the next chapter will be in.;)

That story is one of the best BoF fics I've read yet! I enjoyed it a lot. Tell him that:D

[Weiila]

I'll sticky it for now, but I don't want the page clogged with stickies so I'm unstickying it when the story is done, alright?

[Chris-chris]

Thankies Weiila! I'll send the chapters in as soon as I can so it doesn't stay stickie too long.

The first two chapters will be in tonight. I may just write it all tonight.It all depends if I can get away from the new RPG I got the other day.:thud:

[Weiila]

Unstuck as per request over e-mail.

[Chris-chris]

"Sorry about that guys... my bro had the computer all night and I went to bed. WACK me upside the head because I broke a promise... I tend to keep my promises even though I try to keep them. So, anyone with a club or something can wack me upside the head during the story.

Okay, befor I start the fic, I need to say something. I don't remember everingthing that I fixed, so, Poke, or Weiila, if you read the story through and if you remember some of the stuff that I may leave out, point them out for me, kay? Kay. I'll do my best to revive the story. Hang in ther Poke! You only have to wait five more chapters! *yells down at Poke as he hangs on the cliff hanger* here, Take this in the mean time! *throws down a bucket of pop corn and a soft drink. After that, sits down and starts reading the fic* Hey, throw me up some pop corn well ya'?
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Dragons and Demons

Chapter one: justice, I'm not a crimial, escape Ryu!

Prologue: Ryu woke up in a dungeon not remembering much. He remembers sleeping under the dragon statue when he woke to the sound of soldiers running up to him. They said something to him then hit him across the head with something. He looks for the nearby guard and asked him about his crime. "you killed several people, you murderor."

'I killed... people?' Ryu asked himself. He doesn't know what's going on, but he knew he must escape and find out what the situation is.

Time and place: Two years after the defeat of Deathevn. Wyndian dungeons, cell number thirteen, 12: oo pm.

'I have to get out of here and fast. But how do I get out of here?' Ryu asked himself. He checked the back walls for any sign of weakness but didn't find any. He turned from the brick wall and looked around. After examning his cell, he looked at his cell gate. He noticed that the lower left bar was missing the bottom part. Ryu knew he could move the bar, but he would need someone else to get him out. At this point, Ryu was starting to think there was no way out of here. 'I can't transform, I don't have any of my weapons. But, how do you get out of here Ryu?' the young warrior sat on his broken down bed. 'Dammit. There has to be a way out of here.' Ryu thought.

Just then he heard a loud crashing nose coming from the front gate. "HOLD HER STILL!" Ryu heard a guard's booming voice. "PUT HER IN CELL NUMBER THIRTEEN! Let the murderor deal with this one!" He yelled once more. Ryu really didn't see why they were calling him a 'murderor' as of he didn't kill anybody. Ryu thought as the guards threw a young woman in his cell.

"YOU JERKS! I've never been so mistreated in my life!" she yelled back at them. The young girl started cusing in every sentence when she finally noticed Ryu sitting on the bed. She glared at him and yelled in his ear. "HELLLOOO! ARE YOU AWAKE? OR ARE YOU DEAF?!"

"NO! I'am not deaf!" Ryu shouted back.

"Alright, alright. You didn't have to yell..." She said. The wman turned from him to the back wall. She looked to only be seventeen. She had deep purple hair and wore a black chest plate over a dark blue shirt. She had black pants and metal boots.

"I already tried looking for a way out and I couldn't find one." Ryu told her as she looked at the brick wall. "So, whats your name?" Ryu asked her.

"Its Trenity. Your's?" Trenity answered.

"Ryu. What are you in for?" Ryu tried keeping the conversation going.

"Oh, some jerks thought they'd mess with me, but I taught them a thing or two. How about you?" Trenity said proudly.

"They say I killed several people when I didn't... I think I know of a way out of here, Trenity." Ryu told her.

"You do?! Great! Just tell me what to do." Trenity looked at him.

"You see that bar over there? Its missing part of it's bottom. If I hold it up just high enough for you to escape, well you grave the keys and get me out of here?" Ryu asked her.

"Yeah. We both know neither of us stand a chance alone. So, I'm in." Trenity assured him.

"Alright. I trust you with my life. Now, are there any guards coming?" Ryu looked down the dungeon's hall. "Good. I'm going to left it and your going to have to be quick and crawl through." Ryu told her. He walked to the broken pipe and graved it. He pulled it up just high enough for Trenity to fit through. She crawled underneith the bar and looked for the keys. Ryu sat the bar back place, then he watched Trenity.

Trenity walked along the wall quietly. She came up to the desk and saw the guard asleep. the young girl quietly graved the keys from the guards belt. After a moment of silence, she went back to Ryu's cell. She unlocked the gate and Ryu walked out. Trenity was smiling proudly as Ryu said, "You're like a mouse. Thank you, now if you'll follow me, I can get us out of here." Ryu turned away from her and saw the guard from eariler. 'Shit!' Ryu thought as the Wyndian soldier noticed the two and started to run torwards them.

"Holt! Stop right there!" the guard yelled. Ryu looked at Trenity and nodded. Trenity looked a little confused as Ryu brought his hands into the air slowly. The guard came up to them. "How did you two escape? Your going back in there. Yo, you! Wake up you bone head!" he said as he woke the guard from his nap.

"Excuse me officers, but I really have to leave the castle now. Forgive me for this." Ryu said as he ramed into the first soldier. They went into the wall. After Ryu knocked the first guard out, he quickly ran to the other one and threw his elbow into the other soldiers neck. "They'll be out for a while. Come on." Ryu said as he looked at Trenity. The two ran up the dungeon hall to a set of stairs.

When they reached the top of the stairs, Ryu peeked around the cornor to see no guards. 'So far clear. Good escape.' Ryu couldn't help but think. He slowly walked around the cornor and walked left.

"Uhh... Ryu, the exits this way." Trenity pointed the other way.

"You go on ahead. I have to get my sword back." Ryu told her. Out of all the things that could happen to him, he would risk it all to get his Dragon blade back. That sword was the sword that the Great Dragon Lord Ladon had given him. The powerful blade had saved Ryu many times.

"Ryu. We don't have time for you and your stupid sword. We have to get out of here." Trenity said.

"Go on. I have to get it back. I'll meet you down the hall in a while." Ryu said as he continued his way down te left path. trenity rolled her eyes and ran down the right hall.

Ryu had reached a wooden door. He opened it and carefully walked in. The room was full of swords, suits of armor, all kinds of weapons that a warrior could want. The young warrior walked to a pile of swords and started to dig for his own blade. After awhile, Ryu still didn't have his saber. 'Shit, not one of them ids mine. maybe it's in the King's War room...' Ryu thought. Ryu left the room and started for the King's War room.

Ryu found another set of stairs and went up them. He came to yet, another hall. He checks the hall for any guards and found only one. He waited for the soldier to walk to the stairs, then he knocked the unexpecting man out. After setting the soldier in a spot where he wouldn't catch any attention, Ryu started his way down the Royal Hall. a little ways down, Ryu found the Thone Room doors wide open. Figuring the king would be there, Ryu hide behind one of the wooden doors. while hiding, he could hear a disscusion the king was having with two other men.

"No... the worse that could happen is that that 'murderor' could escape and start killing people once again. Not only that but also the demon attacks are starting to scare the people your majesty. " the old general spoke out loud.

"Yes, but let's not worry about him. We must be concerned with the demon attacks. Admeral, what did you say about a plan?" the king turned to the new admerial.

"Yes your majesty. If you recall, the last demon attack was her in this little village of Captin. If you'll look here, you can see that the demon is circling around us," the admerial pointed out on a map. "It's next attack will be some where in the grassy high lands. In the Village of Grain. I say we attack it befor it starts to attack the village." the man suggested.

"Hmm... what do you think General?" the king asked.

"I think its a wonderful idea. I'll send my men there at dawn. the village will be cleared befor the demon starts his attack. Good day your majesty." the general bowed and left the room.

"Good day, your majesty." the admeral bowed and left the room as well.

'A demon attacking the villages? could it be Deathevn? No, my friends and I defeated him.' Ryu thought. After a quick glance to see if anyone was coming, Ryu slipped past the doors and on to the War room.

When Ryu walked into the room, he saw it was a bright room with maps every where. In the center of the room was a table covered with more maps, around the table was suits of armor. After a minute, Ryu began he search. He looked under the table, under the maps, in the suits of armors. His sword was no where to be found. As he started his way to the door, he heard hills of boots clapping aganist the floor. Ryu had to hide somewhere. He quickly hide behind the curtains. The young warrior could see well enough who walked in. Nina came into the room and walked to the table. She started to look through the maps. As happy as Ryu was to see his long time friend, he didn't want her to see him.

After a while, Nina spoke, "Come on out Ryu. I know your there." She was still looking through the maps as Ryu came out from behind the curtains.

"Eh... how did you know it was me?" he asked, dumfounded.

"I went to the dungeons to help you out when I saw that you were gone. I figured you'd be looking for your sword. So, here. And heres you knife. Ryu..." Nina looked at him as he threw his sword strap over his sholder. " I know you didn't kill all those people, but father does. Your a wanted men now... so, please becareful." Nina said to him.

"Don't worry Nina. I'll be just fine. You take care." Ryu said as he gave her a comforting smile. Nina smiled back as he walked past her. "Ohh, and, don't let them get you down because of your wings. I'm still your friend." he turned back to her. The black winged Princess nodded and watched him leave.

The blue haired warrior made his way down the hall only to bump into Trenity. "Ouch! Watch it!" she yelled in a whisper.

"Sorry, didn't see you down there. So, what you watching?" Ryu said as he bent down next to her.

"You see that group of guards? They're guarding something..." Trenity said as she pointed a five guards.


"But, isn't that their job? Listen, I have an idea." Ryu motioned for her to listen. She giggled as Ryu told her the plan. After Ryu had told her, she jumped up to the railed ceiling. Then she hopped to the rail above the guards. Ryu nooded as he step from behind the cornor."Hey guys... I've escaped." Ryu left himself open.

"Hey, it's that bastard who killed all those people. GET HIM!" They yelled. Just as they started moving, Trenity fell ontop of the back two. The front three looked back and one almost yelled for help when Ryu came from behind and hit him in the back of the neck. Trenity quickly got to her feet and triped the other two soldiers. Ryu graved their shields and bashed them upside the head.

"See ya'!" Trenity saaid as the two ran out of the palace. "we were a great team, weren't we Ryu?" Trenity luaghed as they ran through the front court yard.

"Yeah. We were." Ryu chuckled.

"Hey, do you mind if I stick with you? Until I get back on my feet that is." Trenity asked.

"Sure. But if you get hurt, don't blame me." Ryu said.

"Yeah sure. Like I'm going to get hurt! HAH! I'll blame you for anything that happens!" Trenity laughed. Ryu smiled as he looked at the draw bridge.

'Just beyond that gate is the town. I'll have to find out more about this demon and the attacker.' He thought. The two was out of the castle walls by sun rise.

To be cntinued........

there we go. Farme, you have better had read that. Chp. two will be in when ever I get the chance. Weiila, as soon as I get chp. 5 in, can I have this in the archives? Thankies!

[pokefreak_85]

*catches the soft drink and the popcorn*
*realises that I had to let got to catch them*
AAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaahh.................


Anyway, I didn't find anything that you might have missed... But I've got really bad memory, so I'm the wrong person to ask...

[Weiila]

Looking very nice, Chris. It truly shows that you've improved a lot since the first time you sent me the first chapter :-) Keep up the good work!

[Chris-chris]

Yeah! thankies weiila! opps! hang on Poke! *graves his hand.Pulls him up to where he's still hanging* Chapter two tonight!

[Chris-chris]

Opps! Chris-chris is a bad girl! Here beat me with them! *hands everyone a bat* I know I said I'd have chapter two in about a week ago, I'm sorry you guys. Chapter two well be in soon.

Master Weiila, can I start calling you master Weiila?:kissy:

[Chris-chris]

chapter 2: Mysterious Demon attacks; the imposter Ryu

The sun was just starting to rise over the village houses as Ryu and Trenity were asking around about the demon attacks and the murderor. Not too many people knew about the demon attacks and they were getting very little information about the killer. Men were getting ready for work as children were running to the school building. Ryu and Trenity was inside the blacksmith's shop asking him questions.

"Nahh, they caught the blue hair'd guy who was killing all them people." Said the villages blacksmith.

"What did he look like?" Ryu ask.

"Well, he had blue hair, just like you. He had a black sword and a red violet cape." The blacksmith replaid.

"How well did you see him?" Ryu asked again.

"Well, he threatend a young girl and I stode up to him. Eh, I gusse my bluff scared him away." he answered. "You wouldn't happen to be him, would ya'?" The weapon builder reached for his ax next to him as he eyed Ryu.

"Huh, don't worry sir. That no good crook is locked up." Trenity reasured him. The man put his ax down carefully, still looking at Ryu.

'Blue hair like me? What the hell is going on?' Ryu thought.

"Ryu, we might find some more information at the bar." Trenity
suggested.

"Yeah. Come on Trenity. Thank you for your time, sir." Ryu thanked the blacksmith and left the shop.

"Ryu. I'm going to go equip myself. Don't cause any trouble at the
bar." Trenity told him. She walked the opposite direction of the bar.

'She must think I'm one of those... just like Bow.' Ryu thought. He walked into the bar to see more people than he exppected. The air was filled with smoke and the smell of beer. 'Good thing I have dragon lungs, achk!' Ryu thought as he coughed his way to the tender. After blowing the smoke away from his eyes, he
sat down to look for any foreiners.

"Can I get you something?" The bartender asked.

"Nahh." Ryu said. The bar was pack with drunken men
everywhere. Ryu's hopes of talking to any one was decreasing.

"You look as if your looking for someone." the bartender remarked.

"I'm looking for someone who would know of the demon attacks. Do you know of any one?" Ryu asked.

"Yeah. You see that guy over there, in the corner... he says he
survied an attack. Hey, you aren't that murderor are you?" the bartender looked at Ryu.


"No. He was caught and thrown in the dungeon. Thank you." Ryu said. The young warrior stode up. He stumbled his way over to a table with a man playing cards with three younger men.

"You cheated! You cheated you little bastard!" yelled the drunk.
The other three men left the table as he banged his beer on the table, making it slip all over the place. "Whatda you want?" the drunk asked Ryu.

"Someone told me you lived through a demon attack. Can you tell me about?" Ryu asked as he sat down.

"So your wanting to hear about ther diamon, eh? Alright... I'd just
woken up to go tor work... hiccup... The day started out real slow and normally... hiccup... the drunk was rocking back and forth.

I think itwer about noon when the sky went red... hiccup...
everyone was coming out of their shops to see what was going on...

(he started to lean to the side, Ryu follow'd to keep direct eye contact)

Then a fire ball came out of the sky... hiccup... When it touched the ground, the houses around it melted... hiccup...

(he leaned the other way)

It formed a dragon... is the dragon's still alive? The creature started to destory the village. hiccup... hiccup.. hiccup..." The man was so drunk that he fell face first onto the table.

"Thanks for your time..." Ryu said as he tossed a gold coin on the
table. Ryu walked back to the front to think a little more. 'A demon who looks like a dragon... hmm.. this dosen't sound too good.'

"Hey Ryu! So, did you find out some information?" Trenity came up to him.

"Yeah. What did you get? Some knives?" Ryu asked. He saw a set of daggers on her belt.

"Not just any old daggers. These daggers here are my speial daggers. Just like you and your sword, I have my daggers." Trenity said.

"Okay, okay. As long as you know how to use them." Ryu shruged.

"Can I order a drink?" she asked him. The tender got her a drink

"Yeah. Nothing too heavy though..." Ryu said as he handed her some gold coins. Trenity called for the tender and ordered rum. she payed for the drink and took a big sip.

"What? We going some where?" Trenity ask as she took a gulp.

"We're going to go and stop the Demon." Ryu told her.

"Demon... you mean big scary monster with scary supernaturial
powers? Great! So when we going?" Trenity ask. She seemed drunk. Ryu looked at her and then the Bartender.


"What has she been drinking?" He ask the bartender.

"Good and strong rum. Would you like some?" The bartender ask
thoughtfully.


"No. Come on Trenity. I better get you out of here before you start getting close." Ryu said to her. Ryu stode up to walk to the door. He looked at the door an saw five gaurds looking at him. They were walking towards him and Trenity. "Shit! Lets go Trenity!" Ryu shouted as he graved Trenitys wrist. He ran for the back door.

"Get them!" Yelled the captin. Ryu reached the back door and he
turned the nobb, but instead of walking out, they fell down a trap door.

"Yeahhhhh!!" Trenity yelled as if she was enjoying the fall. They
came to a fork in the tunnel and Trenity went down the left side after Ryu went down the right side. Trenity landed in hard coal while Ryu landed in a soft, feathery bed.

"Ohhh. It's a man..." said a woman. Ryu had fallen into the girl's show room.

" Hey there... you look a little lonely... why don't we cheer him
up, girls.." The girls in this room wore small suits, some wore bikinis and bathing suits.. They slowly walked over to him. Ryu went a little red. About ten girls were moving in on Ryu. He back up in the bed as an attempt to escape them, but his body couldn't move.

"Umm... excuess me... ladies... but I..." Ryu said. He managed to
get off the bed but now was stuck in a corner.

"Don't woory. We don't bite." Said a woman wearing a blue bikini.
They were now real close to Ryu.

"Ohh... whats with the sword and armor? Are you a strong warrior?" Asked a girl wearing a pink bunny outfit. The girls were now reaching out for Ryu's arms.

"Excuess me girls... but I really have to go..." Ryu said as he
pulled their hands off of his chest. He couldn't keep up with them there were just to many hands for a guy to deal with. Ryu got to thinking about Bow.

"Noo..." the girls whined.

Just as Ryu was being covered by girls, the guards burst open the door. "Back away from him girls. He's the murderor." The captin told them. Ryu was happy to see the guards for once that day. The girls moved away from Ryu leaving him wide open for an assult.

'I don't want to kill anyone, so... I hope those lessons from Katt
helps.' Ryu thought. He tightend his fist. The first front two gaurds moved towards Ryu. He gave the first two a good punch, but then the rest of them moved at him. Ryu was pushed down to the ground. They had Ryu on the floor for a moment but Ryu was able to pull his strength and push the guards off of him.

Ryu managed to get out of the room. While running, Ryu looked inside his pocket for his dragon tear it wasn't there. He
remembers seeing it on the desk but foregot to grave it. Ryu was running down a path and he saw a group of guards being pushed back ahead of him. 'What the heck is going on?' Ryu wounderd what was happening.

When Ryu reached the stairs, he saw two familiar figures. "Bow! Katt!" He said as he stop in front of them.

"Hey Ryu. Can't you stay out of trouble without us?" Katt said.

"Nice to see you too, Katt. How's it going."Ryu smiled at his
friends.

"Gee, Ryu. What did you get your self into now?" Bow said.

"Later. Have you two seen a girl with dark purple hair?" Ryu asked.

"I'm right here!" Trenity said as she peeked from behind Bow.

"Good. You're safe. We have to talk. I'll explain every thing when we get outside." Ryu said. They left the bar and walked to the hotel.

next chapter.....



Better? For some reason I feel like somethings missing... uh. I hate it. If there are any errors just tell me and I will correct them. Master Weiila, did I miss anything? I feel like I did...
:hmm:

[wingnut]

(the drunk was rocking back and forth)
Um... normally that would be put in the paragraph, without brackets. Other than that, it looks much better than last time! :D

[Chris-chris]

Okay, I think thats what was needed to be done... anything else?

[Chris-chris]

Part 3: Secret in the Alley

Bow and Katt was in the palace talking to Nina but instead of talking normally, they were speaking in low voices.

"So you see, his Dragon tear is in the dungeon... do you think you could get it for him?" Bow asked Nina.

"Yes I can, but how is he?" Nina looked worried.

"He's alright, today was pretty rough and he's resting right now."
Katt whispered.

"Good. I'll be right back. Wait in the hall." Nina said to them.

"Move fast Nina, every minute wastes time." Bow told her.

Nina walked down to the dungeons to see the guas asleep next to the walls. She sighed and walked to the front desk.

"Can I help you m'lady?" the guard asked her.

"Hmm... yes. Is there a black stone down here?" Nina asked
poilitely.

"Well, Admerial Damine took that stone, he said if you came
looking for it, you'll have to talk to him." The gaurd told Nina.

Nina did not like the new Admerial her father hired for their protection. She honestly had a bad feeling about this new guy...


"Alright, I'll go speak with him... thank you." Nina said good bye
and left the dungeon.

"Sorry guys, I'm going to have to speak with the admerial. I'll be
right back, please have a seat." Nina offered her friends the bench and walked towards the war room.


She walked in to see the young, blue haire admerial sitting on the window seel. In his right hand was the Dragon tear.

"Good evening Admerial Damine... how are you?" Nina asked with
kindness. (although she really despiced the guy.)

" Great Miss Nina... how are you?" he asked without looking at her.

(The Dragon tear went black)

"Oh... I'm fine... Admerial Damine... can I see that stone?" Nina
asked.

(She could feel a lump in her throat.)

" Why yes, Princess..." Damine handed her the stone. His eyes met hers, she had to look away because his eyes resembled Ryu's eyes.

"Thank you, can I keep this stone? It's really beautful..." Nina was hoping he wouldn't know anything about her and Ryu.

"Yes you may."

"Thank you." Nina bowed her head and turned for the door.

"Oh... Princess Nina... do't try hiding him... I know where he
is..." Damine whispered from behind. He walked past her. The dragon tear was held tightly and a tear rolled down her cheek. She wiped the tear away and walked back to Bow and Katt.

"Good job Nina! He'll really apperciate this." Bow said. Nina
handed Bow the stone.

"Tell him to becareful..." Nina told him.

"I wouldn't worry about him, Nina. He's a crazy guy... hopefully
they won't get him." Katt said.

"Katt!" Bow elbowed her.

"Sorry! I'm just playing... Ryu well be just fine. Take care Nina."
Katt gently patted Nina shoulder giving her a cheery smile. Nina returned her smile with a smle. The two left the palace.

*

"Here you go Ryu one dragon tear as you requested." Bow said.

"Thanks you guys." Ryu put his Dragon tear back in his bag.

"So... how do you plan to kill the Demon?" Katt asked in her kitten likeself.

"Ok... I remembered hearing the next attack was going to be in... the Village of Grain. I believe I should go there." Ryu said.

"So whats you plan?" Bow asked.

"My plan is to find some more information on the Demon... then I
need to find that imposter." Ryu told them.

"Great. How do you plan to kill the demon?" Katt asked.

"I gusses I'm just going to have to fight it as long as my dragon
powers can hold..." Ryu said.

"You look like you need some rest. Take a nap Ryu. We'll meet you in the Grassy highlands in front of the Village." Bow said to his friend. He gave Ryu a big pat and walked of the hotel with Katt.

Ryu was alone until Trenity came from behind. "Hey Ryu. "

"Hey. Why don't you go on ahead to the room, I need to go outside." Ryu handed her the key and walked outside.

Ryu was outside standing against the brick wall when he heard
luaghter in the near by alley. He crept to the corner to listen.

"Heheh... that was real good, Damine...you're the best!" laughed a icy voice.

"Yes... making everyone believe that boy is the killer was an exclent idea to give me the oppertunity to get my plan in motion." Damine chuckled.

" Yeah! Yeah! And when they find him and kill him you'll be free to
take over the world! Heheh hahaha!" Laughed the voice.

"Clam down my little friend... you don't want to kill yourself
Price." Damine said to Price.

'They're the ones behind all this... but why would they want me dead? I have to wake Trenity and leave town right away...' Ryu thought. He slipped back into the hotel and ran up to the room.

"Trenity. Trenity... wake up... we have to leave now... come on!"
Ryu shook her. She woke up and asked,

" Whats the rush?" She rubbed her eyes.

"I'll explain on the way. Come on." Ryu threw her her chest armor and daggers and the two left Wyndia.

next chapter...........

Sorry for posting in so much, I'll go check that... I see A LOT of errors.:fungah:

[Chris-chris]

Anything wrong there? I'm still going back and froth tring to find any errors. Next chapter later.

[Chris-chris]

Sheesh, a lot of double posting, eh? Sorry about it you guys. I'll try to wait for replais next time. Anyways, heres chapter four! I'm on a roll!

part 4: Destory the demon; a mission failure?

Ryu and Trenity were walking through a grassy field talking. The Village was up ahead and a dragon statue was off to their right. The sun was out high and dragonflies were buzzing around their heads as the summer wind blew a nice breeze.

"So, the guy Damine is the real killer... how are you going to find
him? And why didn't you attack him back in the alley?!" Trenity yelled. Ryu had expland the whole situation to her, now she was complaining about it.

"If I did he would've called for the guards and then I would've been in big trouble for sure. Anyways, I think I've seen him
before..." Ryu thought hard but nothing came to mind.

"Maybe you saw him in your reflection... heheh." Trenity laughed in a whisper.

"Trenity, this is noo.. whoaaa!" Ryu fell to the ground landing flat
on his face. "What was that for?" He shouted. Trenity had tripped him and was on the ground herself.

She put a finger to her mouth and looked down the hill. "The
soldiers are down near the village... look." She pointed out.

Ryu looked down the hill to see a camp with several soldiers waiting for the demon. As they sat there planning and watching every little soldier the cautious man felt something poking his shoulder. He expected a soldier so he slowly reached for his sword hilt... as/when he had a hold of the hilt, he quickly drew it out to attack.

"WHOAA!!" Katt yelled as she flew back to douge Ryu's blade. She hit the ground bottom first and sat there in pain.

"Katt!! I'm sorry! I thought you were... you were a..." Ryu tried to
apologize but she held a hand out to stop him speaking then rubbed her bottom.

"Hey buddy... you look good in green... hey there Trenity." Bow
said. (His Cheeks turned a little red)

"Hi Bow and Katt!" Trenity said cheerfully. Ryu, Bow and Katt bent
down to the ground.

"So... what do you plan to do?" Katt asked Ryu. Her ears twitched as Ryu took a deep breath.

"I dunno... still thinking... did you guys find out any thing on the
Demon?" Ryu turned to them.

"Kind of... you remember how you were, supposedly, killing the
people? Well, at the same time the demon was attacking the first village, Vilina. Now, if you think about it, the demons can't work without someone controlling them... and what better way to control a demon then causing pain and hatered?" Bow said.

"Hmmm... but how could the demons be resurected? It doesn't make sense... hey, have you guys heard of someone named Damine?" Ryu started to say when Trenity elbowed Ryu's ribs.

"They're coming!" She told him.

"Huh?" Ryu looked down the field to see three soldiers runing up towards them. "Shoot! Okay! Bow, you and Katt wait for me in the village. Trenity, you go wait at the dragon statue and don't move from there, wait for the demon to come. I'll meet with you then." Ryu told them. Trenity and Katt jumped up.

"No way! I'm not letting you go alone! There's no telling what they'll do to you!" Katt yelled at him.

"Yeah! If your going then I'm going!" Trenity shouted. Ryu sighed and looked at Bow for some assistence. Bow shruged.

"You must go. I don't want you guys harmed due to what they believe. I can't afford to have you guys harmed. If something bad is to happen to me, then you will have to stop the demon with out me. Please?" Ryu pleaded. Katt bit her lip as Trenity sobbed. Bow placed a hand on Katt's shoulder.

"Katt, you know he's right... now come on." Bow said to her.

"Alright. But be careful!" Katt yelled at Ryu. Bow and Katt ran off to the village as Trenity ran for the dragon statue. Ryu took off the cape and stretched out his arms. "Ignore them! It's me you want!" Ryu yelled at the soldiers. They ran up to Ryu and bashed him upside his head with their shields. Ryu hit the fround hard and was beaten until he was unconcious..

*
Ryu was reawoken by cold water splashing in his face. "Wake up! Wake up!" someone shouted at him. Ryu opened his eyes and tried to move, but only to notice that his hands was tied to a pole. He looked around to see a tent and a table that three Wyndian soldiers sitting around it, two on the right and one on the left. In the right hand cornor, was his sword.

"What time is it?" Ryu asked.

"It's eight o'clock and all is well... too well I'll say." answered
the soldier on the left as he put down a bucket.

" Can I speak to your General? As my last request?" Ryu asked.

"I'm already here..." said a voice at the entrance. Ryu looked to
see an old man wearing Wyndian clothing. His gray hair was slicked back and his uniform was premind pressed. "Men, I'd like to speak with him alone... thank you." The general dissmissed them as they left.

There was a long pause before either of them spoke.

"So, you're the famous hero Ryu, eh? Princess Nina speaks of you
often..." the general looked at Ryu's Dragon tear.

"Yes... er... is she alright?" Ryu asked.

"Yes, she is... but is very worried about you... she doesn't beleive
you killed those people, so, I'll have siome trust in you as well." The general cut the rop that was binding Ryu to the center pole. Ryu stode up and rubbed his wrist.

"I need you to warn Nina for me... a guy named Damine is the real killer... he's planning on controling the world. If not, then he'll destory it. Can you tell her that?" Ryu told the old man.

"You must be talking about the admirial... come to think of it. He
does have a great resemblance to you... she has been
complaining to her father bout him... alright, I'll tell her... you wait here." the general turned to walk out of the tent.

"General, sir, becarefull." Ryu told him. The general smiled and
step outside.

"Ryu reequiped himself with his weapon's then sat on the bench. He waited for a while when he heard a noise. Ryu looked around the room to see nothing of the soruce. He then looked at the floor. Trenity,apperently, had dug a small tunnel in the ground of the tent and was peeking in, smiling weakly.

"Trenity! What are you doing her?! I thought I told you to stay at
the statu" Ryu yelled at her in a whisper.

"But... but... I thought you would like to know that the demon is
about to appear..." Trenity told him.

"WHAT?!!" That time, the guards heard him.

"Hey, what's going on in there?"

"Shoot, hang on, I'll be out in a minute." Ryu told her. Her head
disappeared. Ryu started to dig the hole a little deeper so he could crawl through. When the hole was deep enough, Ryu slipped through and met Trenity on the other side. "Go back to the statue and wait there. I'll see you in a few minutes." Ryu sound as if he hoped this battle wasn't going to take very long. After they seperated, Ryu started his way through the back part of the camp, knocking out any guard who saw him, to the village.

When he ran into the village, nothing seemed to be
wrong. 'Where is it?' Ryu asked himself. He looked around the dark, quiet village but saw nothing. 'Good, at least the general had the village clear befor it came...' he thought.

Suddenly, a loud, cracking sound came from the sky. He looked up to see the clouds turning brown and the stars dissapearing into a red flare. The sky was blood red when a yellow and orange fire ball appeared above Ryu. It drew cloeser and cloeser Ryu had to roll out of the way of its impact. He was nearly burned by a spark of lava. The warrior turned around to see the fire ball forming a creature. It formed a body, long skinny arms, muscluar legs and a large alien like head. Flames appeared on it's back to form wings like a dragon's.

The demon threw its arm into some buildings causing the building to burn and fall in ruin. Ryu was almost hit by a burning piece
of timber but he fell to the ground in order to avoid it.'I have to do something fast!" he couldn't think clearly though. Ryu didn't notice the Wyndian soldiers running to the battle ground from behind until he heard a yell.

"Get in formation men! Don't be afaird of it!" The general yelled.
His men all formed an attack tactic to attack the huge beast. Arrows flew by Ryu's head at the demon only to be unaffected.

"NO! Get out of here!" Ryu yelled at them. But the men stode their grounds ready to fight til the death. "er... I gusses I'm going to have to transform now... (ice dragon... grant me the ability of ice force...)" Ryu pleaded to his blood line of his dragon powers. As his blood ran quickly through his veins, his skin was changing color. a flashing blue light engulped Ryu as he transformed into an ice dragon. When the transformation was complete, Ryu was now a huge ice, blue dragon. He unfolded his might wings and the ground below him froze in an instant.

"Retreat!! Retreat!!" Yelled the men. The soldiers ran out of
the village. They never imagined a dragon and a demon in one spot together.

The village was in flames and the ice dragon knew it didn't have
much of a chance in this inferno, so, it had to end this battle quickly. Ryu used an ice blast at the demon. The demon shouted and countered with a slash at Ryu's chest. The dragon charged at the demon knocking them to the ground. The demon got up before the dragon and charged for a fire ball assult. By the time Ryu stood up on its hind legs, the demon launched the attack. Ryu couldn't escape the attack. As it drew nearer and nearer, the dragon's hope of winning turned down.

"Dark powers of Death I summon thee! Death slice!" Trenity yelled as a blast of dark magic shot from her fingers. The dark attack deflected the demons firey blast.

"Cure two!" Bow yelled as he healed Ryu.

"Finish it, RYU!" Trenity yelled.

The ice dragons chest puffed up as it sucked in the air getting
ready to attack. As its last attack, the ice dragon fired a powerful ice beath. The demon threw its arms around in pain as it got one last hit in the dragon before it died. Ryu fell back and hit the ground. The ice dragon was no more and Ryu was back at his normal self. The village was in flames and Bow had to carry Ryu around.

"You two girls go back to Wyndia, hurry up... here they come." He
told them.

"Hold it Bow! I'm not letting you guys go alone again!" Katt argued once again.

"Katt, we don't have time for this! You two get outta here and try to find a way to get us out of there once we're in the dungeons. Now go." Bow told her. Katt and Trenity ran for the nearby woods as Bow and Ryu was taken by the Wyndian soldiers.
*
"Hey buddy... wake up..." Bow said. Ryu opened his eyes to see complete darkness.

"Where are we?" He asked.

"We're in the Wyndian castle's dungeon... gee, they must really
think your dangerous now..." Bow said.


Ryu felt something metle around his legs,and arms. He couldn't move. "Where are the girls? Are they all right?" Ryu asked. (He tried to move his hand but couldn't.)

"I told 'em to run... careful, they have you chained up to the
wall." Bow told him. He fingured Ryu would wander what was going on.

"So... just using my power to save everyone's life, they think I'm
going to kill them... man what a crazy week this has been..." Ryu said weakly.

"That's the problem... we DIDN'T kill the DEMON. There're still MORE out there..." Bow said."Nina said that there is more out there... so, we failed to kill of the demons... sorry buddy..." Bow said lowly.

The two didn't talk for a long while. Ryu had several thoughts go
through his head all at once. Then, the dungeon door flew open.

"Who is it buddy?" Bow asked.

"Hang on..." Ryu fixed his eyes. After a minute or two, the young blue hair'd warrior saw Damine! In the palace of his best friend!

"Hmmm... it's him alright... Bring him to the tower... heh." Damine
could see Ryu in the dark even though the torches were way behind him.


"Buddy... what's wrong?" Bow asked as he saw a group of soldiers with torches come up to their cell. They walked in and clubbed Ryu upside the head knocking him out. Then, they unlocked his chains and dragged the dragonic warrior out of the
dungeon.

next chapter.......


Phew, there were a lot of errors in that... Did I miss any?

[wingnut]

Yay, more paragraph stuff. Um... the battle description sounds a bit... strange. *shrugs* Other than that, it really seems to be improving.

[Chris-chris]

I'm not too sure how to fix it... can you possibly give me an example?

[Weiila]

You're improving, Chris :-)
I think I'll refrain from beta reading you right now and let you hear some others' opinions for a change :)

[Chris-chris]

Okay Master Weiila, but will you still look at my real life story?

job for beta reading you guys? Anyone want to help me? :( :hmm:

[pokefreak_85]

I think that what Weiila meant was that you should post the chapters here to get comments from the people here instead of sending it to her...

*must resist... urge to make... bad pun while correcting... grammar about... "Master Weiila"*

[Chris-chris]

Oh... I see then. Okay. I'll start doing that.

right! I better change that to Misstress Weiila.

[Weiila]

Sure, I'll still comment on your real life story of course, Chris. As Poke said, I just meant that you should get some comments here from more people and not only from me since I've given you so much advice already. I just think you should get to hear some more opinions.

[Chris-chris]

Misstress Weiila, would you like me to send the next chapter of that Zelda fic here? Or send it to you?

Anyways, I'll have the last two chapters in later.

[Weiila]

You can post that here too. And I'm gonna beta read it any day now >_< Sorry Chris...

[Chris-chris]

Dragons and Demons pt. 5; Ryu vs. Damine


The guards were dragging Ryu up Nina's tower. As they past by Nina's bedroom door, the Wyndian princess happens to notice them. She peeked her head out to see them dragging Ryu up the stairs. "Excuses me sirs'... where are you taking him?" she asked politly.

"Admerial Damine wanted him brought up to the tower m'lady." the guard on the left answered.

"Very well then. I shall be the one to witness his punishment." Nina nodded and followed behind them. She couldn't bare seeing Ryu like that, but she knew if she was going to help she had to follow them. They went up the spiraling stair case to reach a wooden door that would lead to the top of the tower. The soldiers opened the door and shuffled Ryu through it.

"Princess Nina... how great it is to see you out here to watch this
crimnal's punishment... men, could you leave us alone?" Damine gave them a look and the soldiers left the tower.

"Damine, I have reason to beleive you are the one behind all the demon attacks, and you are the real murderor... is this true?" Nina demaned.

"Why yes Princess... I'm surprised you figured it out..." Damine
chuckled.

"So... your the one who is controlling the demons... why? Why would you have such horrible creatures killing so many people?" Nina asked her tone sounded a little heart broken.

"Because... they destoryed me life. I hate them all to hell! They murdered my family! Destroyed my village! And completely
destroyed my life!" Damine yelled.

"Who!? Who did, Damine?!" Nina asked softly.

"The demons! They killed them in front of my eyes and burned my
village. And now, its time for a little pay back! But because of Ryu and his friends, I cannot get revenage on Deathevn.Instead, Death evn came to me and told me he'd give me the power to control his monsters only if I were to destroy the destined child. But, I have other plans instead of killing that weak dragon there and his friends. I'll destroy the world instead!"Damine shouted.

"You cannot do that! I won't let you!" Nina yelled almost panicy.

"What are you going to do? Price! Get her!" Damine yelled. Nina didn't have a chance to move when Price came from behind and graved her neck. He turned the princess around and kicked her into the back wall. As Nina sat next to the pillar, she could feel
tentackles moving around her body.


*

"Ryu...."


"....."

"Ryu... get up my destined child..."

"Mom?"

"Get up Ryu... your friends are in danger..." Ryu could hear his moms soft, dragon like voice speaking to him.

"But mom, I don't have the strength to fight anymore... I feel like
all my energy's being drained from my body... I can't save them anymore..." Ryu cryd.

"Don't say that my son... you are a dragon... you have your friend's faith in you... do you plan to give up? After you defeated Deathevn? How can you say that when you have friends to protect and people you care about?! Now wake up... my son..." Valirie said. Ryu could feel his mother's warmthful touch and strength flowing within his blood. "I'll always love you..."

*

Ryu reopened his eyes to find himself ontop of Nina's tower. He could feel the wind's high gust and the roahing of a thunderstorm around him. the brave warrior stoodup only to be pushed by a gust of wind. "Well well well... what do we have here? The dragon boy has finally awoken. Heh. It's too late kid! I already have the Princess and the power to control the demons! Your just too late!"Damine shouted.

" What have you done with her?! Where is she?!" Ryu shouted. He had such the urge to cut Damine's throat.

"She right over there... eh." Damine pointed to a machine that had half of Nina's body. The machine looked much like the one back in Evari, the one that had Ganer, Ryu's father, in it. It was glowing red ever five seconds. Ryu tryed to get her unattatched but Price came from above and hit Ryu across the face with a pole.
Ryu looked baack at the attacker and saw that Price was a small and skinny man. He had pale skin and black slicked hair. His eyes were black and he wore only black pants.

"Heheeh! Lets see you try that again!" Price laughed. Ryu wipe the trail of blood from his mouth and looked at Damine.

"What kind of machine do you have her attached to?!" He
demaned.

"The same machine that had your father Ryu. It is taking away
her energy and is giving it to me... you know how hard it is to control demons without strong enough energy. You can't save her now Ryu, she's almost dead, heh." Damine chuckled. As he talked, Ryu thought he heard a voice from the past. A cold, cruel voice that he remembered all too well. It was a voice to Deathevn.


"How dare you use her as a soruce for your evil intensions... she is needed for her people and she is my friend. I won't let you take her." Ryu said calmly as he closed his eyes. 'Master Ladon... this will probably be the last time I use this sword... so please lend me your strength and power... help me save my friend once again...' Ryu asked his Dragon God, Ladon, for his help. A sliver illamute ball appeared above Ryu. He reached out for it and the ball turned into a sword. He turned to looked at Price.

"Heheh... what are yoy looking at? Gotta stairing problem?Heh!"Price laughed.

"No... just planning..." Ryu said.

"You better make that smirk disappear befor I make it disappear for you." Price was getting angry.

"Alright, come get me..."

"Errrrr! I can't hold back anymore Damine! He's dead!!" Price charged at Ryu.

"No! Price! You fool!" Damine yelled. Ryu swiftly moved his sword
verticily then thrusted his Dragon blade through Price. "Errr, you'll pay for that!" Damine yelled. He threw his hand in the air and
started chanting, 'I'am wind I'am power! My holy gust shall defeat your power! I'am wind I'am power! My holy gust shall defeat your power!' He kpet repeating these words over and over and with wach repeated set, a yeloowish-green areo grew
bigger around him. After the fith pharse, he shouted " Gust of WIND!" He fired a huge, spear like, wind attacking at Ryu. The blue haired dragon had no chance of escape and was hit sharply in the stomache. Ryu flew off the edge.

The dragon warrior had no way of transforming due to the pain he was feeling. He was inches from the ground when a Great, pink bird caught him. "Mina! Thank you for saving me! Now take me up the tower to save Nina!" Ryu thanked the bird and held on tightly as the Great Bird flew up the tower.

About half way up the tower, Ryu stode up on the birds back. 'I call upon the powers flowing within my veins... the dragon blood that grants me power to protect people... I command thee Thunder Dragon to help me in the request!' "THUNDER DRAGON!" Ryu shouted. The storm clouds built up with flashes of lighting. Ryu was hit by a clap of lighting as a yellow light came from his body. He opened his eyes, they were now that of a serpant. He jumped off the birds back to transform in a clab of lighting into a thunder dragon. The Great Bird flew away from the battle until
she would be needed again.


Ryu flapped his mighty wings and flew for Damine. "So, you want to fight as DRAGONS do you? Alright then..."Damine said. He closed his eyes as red light surrounded him. The light grew brighter as his dragon wings grew from his back. No sooner did his transformation start did it end with a Black dragon replace Damine. Damine snorted and flew after Ryu. Ryu got ready for the black dragon by flapping his wings and went higher into the air. Damine followed as he inhaled air to breath out fire. The thunder dragon moved to the side and summoned lighting to strike Damine but was only to be deflected by Damine. The dark dragon caught up with Ryu and hit Ryu across the face with his spike tail. Ryu roahed in pain.



to be continued......

Okay. Theres that. How was that Wingnut? Any better? I hope it sounded much better to you Misstress Weiila, because I feel like I'm missing something...

[Chris-chris]

*trancing* Hmmm hmmm hmmmm... *still trancing*

Li'l sister/ uh Chris-chris? Could you continue the fic? I wanna hear what happens to Ryu and the others... Chris-chris? Are you even awake?

CC/ *asleep* KABOOM! OUCH! Alright, I'll continue...

OKAY! It's the moment you've been waiting for Poke! Come on up here! I'll tell it to you now. *pulls Poke from the edge* Now, it still may need a brush off but, I'm going to do the best I can! *pulls up shirt shleve*

Chapter 6: The battle of Dragons, the destined child's destiny

The mighty Thunder dragon roahed in pain as it flew back away from Damine. A huge scar was left across Ryu's chest from the slash of the black dragon.Ryu gathered power within his mouth and charged for a blast of thunder. He let the energy brust go after Damine. The black warrior ducked in time and flapped his
wings causing an ultro sound wave. Ryu didn't have enough speed to move and was hit by the sharpe pain. Wounded and woren, Ryu didn't know how much longer he could fight, but he knew he must stay in battle. He called upon the light blots that flashed in the sky and used them on Damine. But no matter where the black dragon went, the jolts missed him.

"Is that the best you can do?" Damine said in his deep, rough, dragon voice.

Back in the forest near Windia, Katt and Trenity awaited for a prefect moment to save the boys.Katt looked into the sky and saw odd lighting bolts that were not like a normal thunder storm. "Katt, I don't like the looks of this storm..." Trenity whimpered.


"Nor do I... it has to be Ryu... come on, we're going to help him."
Katt said. The two were in the forest camping. Katt stode up from her seat and graved her staff. Trenity stode up as well. "Come on,
we're going to Windia." Katt and Trenity walked out of the woods to find Mina flying towards them. "Mina!! Can you take us to Windia?" Katt asked the gaint bird. She nodded her head and tilted for the to climb on. After both girls were on, Mina toke off for the palace where Ryu fought Damine.

The people of Windia were beging to think it was the end of their
lives and started running for the hills to watch helplessly over the Dragon battle and watch their village get caught up in the fight. The dragon's continued their battle and as they continued,
mother nature's balance in power amoung the creatures was losing it's control. The planet shook and disaters were happening everywhere. Ryu wasn't doing too well and it looked like Damine was taking it easy. Ryu feared the worst for the world now. His strength was dairning fast and is powers was so low he could
de-transform at any moment.


"Shit! That's Ryu, and another dragon?!"Katt screamed as they apporached the castle.The huge bird flew torwards the gates. "First we get Bow... then we help Ryu... got it?" Katt told Trenity. The two jumped off of Mina and ran into the palace. Katt and Trenity ran as fast as they could to the dungeons where Bow waited helplessly in his cell. They arrived in the dungeons, "Bow! What cell are you in?!" Katt yelled and waited for a replay.

"DOWN HERE!!!" Bow screamed like he was in a life or death situation. Katt followed the sound of his voice. She found his cell and busted the door open. Bow was screaming like a baby.

"Why are you screaming!! IT HURTS MY EARS YOU KNOW!!" Katt yelled at him.

"Ahhh!! SPIDERSSS! GET ME OUT OF HERE!" he screamed more.

"Uhh, you big baby! Now come on!" Katt broke the chain that held Bow to the wall. He stumbled to his feet. "Ryu's fighting right now and he needs our help!" Katt told him. The three ran outside the palace. Bow saw his best friend losing to another dragon. Bow thought of a quick healing spell.

"HEAL!" he shouted. Bow cast his heal spell on Ryu. Ryu had recovered from his wounds but had no majic to stay as a dragon.
Ryu detransformed near the tower. He landed and rolled to shake off the bad landing.

"Thanks Bow!" Ryu looked at Nina. He ran to her and griped his sword handle. "Let me get you out of here..." he said softly. Ryu looked back up at Damine, the dark dragon was begining to call the demons. Ryu started to chop the machine up. He freeded Nina's right arm and legs. After slicing the last piece of machinary, Ryu held the faintly girl in his arms. Bow, Katt, and Trenity ran up the tower the two.

"Is she all right?" Bow asked.

"She's just fainted. She'll be all right. Come on, we better get down from here befor mister big, bad, and ugly notices he can't control the demons anymore." Ryu said to them. He walked to the edge and waited for Mina. The Great Bird flew to them and lefted them to the ground. Ryu left Nina with her younger sister. "Take her out of here, Mina." Ryu told her.

"So, whose mister big, bad, and ugly?" Katt smirked.

"Damine... he's a dragon clans member just like me... Katt, can you do one spell?" Ryu asked her.

"Yep."

"Good. Your going to use that spell whie I distrack him... can you do it?" Ryu gave her that friendly smile.

"You bet!" Katt said cheerfully.

"Yo! Damine! Come get me!" Ryu yelled out. Damine snorted and charged for Ryu. "Wait for it... wait for it... and, NOW!" Ryu moved from in front of Katt just as she fired her flame spell. Damine didn't expect this and was hit by the fire ball. He crashed to the ground landing in front of Ryu. Ryu looked over him to see if he was dead. Bowand Trenity.

"Is, he dead?" Nina asked.

"I think so..." Ryu said. They all turned to say something to one
another when each were sallowed by a black gooe. It was the demons. Damine was back to his normal state and alive. He stode up to speak with them.

"My... I didn't expect that..." he chuckled. He pushed his hands
foreward making a force push the heros into the castle walls, no
sooner after they touched the wall did the goo turn into stone covering their body but not their heads. "Now, I will make you watch as the people around you die!" Damine tried calling a demon but none came. "What? What has happened?!" he screamed.

"Hah! Looks like father has left you Damine! You can not control the demons anymore!" Trenity yelled. They all looked at her.

"Who are you little girl?! What do you mean?!" Damine demanded.

"My Name is Trenity de Evan! I'am Deathevn's daughter. You can not control the demons. They left you as soon as Ryu got Nina out of that machine father made.Ha, you're going to die any minute now!" Trenity laughed.

"What do you mean Trenity?" Ryu asked her as if he didn't want to believe any of this.

"Sorry Ryu. But I'am the daughter of the man you tried to kill. He is still alive and he'll be back. I was tring to find you and tell you but when I heard of the demon attacks I figured I should wait til we found out what was going on. I'm sorry." trenity said softly.

"It's okay. Right now we have to stop him." Ryu told her. He started to remember what his mother had told him.

*"Don't say that my son... you are a dragon... you have your friend's faith in you... do you plan to give up? After you defeated Deathevn? How can you say that when you have friends to protect and people you care about?!"*

Ryu pulled his strength together. He remembered his friends and the power of Anifini within him. His body changed form as he powered his strengthed to the power once more. The same power he had defeated Deathevn with. After a moment, the stone cocon was broken and Ryu was as a dragon. The Anifini dragon.

"So, back for more are we? Hah!" Damine laughed.

"Damine, we dragons were not meant to destory. Our mission is to protect those who are weak. I do not belive you are one of me... you use your power to hurt the weak. As for that, I have no choice but to kill you!" Ryu yelled. Damine looked at him with a scronfull laugh. The two got ready to fight when Trenity suddenly brusted out of her block.

"Dragons should not fight each other... not like this." she said.

"What are you going to do little girl?" Damined shouted.

"I'm going to seal you back where you came from!" Trenity yelled.
She put her arms in a criss cross pattern. A blue light appeared in front of her. She started to mumble something then fired the bright light at Damine. The dark, dragonic man countered and charged for Trenity. Trenity couldn't move. She was too shocked to move. Ryu carshed into Damine. The Anfini dragon flew above him and powered up for a powerful attack. Damine looked up at The almighty dragon in fear. Ryu relaised the beam of energy at Damine. The once strong imposter holored in pain as the beam destroyed him. Ryu detransformed and the others were free from their compartment. They all looked at one another and smiled.

-Gate; a month later-

Ryu stood in front of the ancient gate that his mother once guarded. Soon, he would too. "I miss you mum. I found sis. I know my place is to be here guarding the gate but give me just a little more time." Ryu stopped when he heard a voice saying,

"A little more time and Nina will kill us for being late to your wedding. Besides, your the groom. Then she'll really have your head." Trenity walked up to him.

"No kidding. Boy, I didn't think she'd say yes." Ryu chuckled.

"Well your majesty, she won't be your wife if your late. Come on. We need to get going." Katt said as she too walked up to him.

"All right. Give me a minute." Ryu chuckled. The two girls left him. Ryu looked back at the gate. ' Yeah, just a little more time...'

The end

Finally! Misstress Weiila, I changed the ending a whole lot as you noticed. Is it better? Or should I have stuck with the other ending? There you have it!

[Sairan]

sounds good. it's better than the stories i come up with, which are usually something like:

two people were in a room. one died. the end.

hope to see more stores from you!:cool:

[Chris-chris]

THank you!

Has anyone played Breath of Fire 2? I know weiila has...
Do you remember...When Ryu would transform, he wouldn't stay as the dragon for the whole battle. Do you know why that was? I have my theory but, I wounder... :hmm:

[pokefreak_85]

Probably because the dragon system in the first game was too powerful, then you just used a little MP to transform and then you stayed as a dragon for the rest of the battle... :p

[Chris-chris]

I think the best dragon system was in BoF 3. That was cool.

Did you enjoy it Poke?:kissy:

[Manus Dei]

I think you've done an excellent work. I'll be sure to read it all ASAP!:D

[Weiila]

I kinda got the idea that Ryu summoned the dragons in BoF2 instead of transforming, since they jumped into the screen and then disappeared again. I'm probably wrong though.

[pokefreak_85]

CC: Yup, I sure agree about that :)
Weiila: Probably, but I still think that I posted the main reason :p

And the fic is great CC, I hope you write some more fics :D

[Chris-chris]

Thank you everyone! I hope you'll liked it!

BTW, I have a zelda fic coming in. So, if you like Zelda then I hope you like my fic!:kissy:

Another BTW, I was suffering the net last night for some good BoF fics and I happen to come across one intitled The Demons and The Dragons. I think that was the title. :(
Anyway, I didn't realise there was a fic already intitle that.:( So... :fungah:

[Weiila]

Chris, there are millions of fics out there and at least a fifth of them share a title, so it's nothing to worry about. Really :-) Here, let me prove it.
Go here:
http://www.fanfiction.net
Now click "Find" in the blue bar, choose "Story by title" and search on any or all of these:
Wine
Black Rose
Sweet Revenge
Moonlight
Shadow

See? :-) Don't worry Chris.

[Chris-chris]

Misstress Weiila, I just read so many great fics from there. Thank you.:wave:

Where to go from here? What happens to the fic once its completed here in the forums? Does it sink into the valleys of trash or does it go into the archives?

Ah yes... I'm open for ideas... *grins as ideas twist in head*

Was this ending better Weiila? ;P

[pokefreak_85]

It mostly goes into the archives, but if you <I>want</I> it to sink into the valleys of trash, well, it's your fic. :p

[Weiila]

Yes, that was a better ending methinks :-)

Just take a look at this paragraph:


She put her arms in a criss cross pattern. A blue light appeared in front of her. She started to mumble something then fired the bright light at Damine. Damine countered and charged for Trenity. Trenity couldn't move. She was too shocked to move. Ryu carshed into Damine. Ryu flew above him and powered up for a powerful attack. Damine looked up at Ryu in fear. The Anifini dragon relaised the beam of energy at Damine. Damine holored in pain as the beam destroyed him. Ryu detransformed and the others were free from their compartment. They all looked at one another and smiled.


Damine, Damine, Damine, Damine, Damine. Ryu, Ryu, Ryu, Ryu, Ryu... etc. The evil repititions will kill us all! AHHHH!!

Oh, and what Poke said :)

[Chris-chris]

okay, is that better?:p

edit: NOOO!!:eek: It can't sink and die! Misstress Weiila! *looks at Weiila tearfully* Can you put it in the next archieve?!

[Weiila]

Will do, Chris :)

Oh, and glad you liked ff.net. Just thread carefully there, you wouldn't believe the amount of sick, twisted, horrible and BAD fics... well, it got better when they scrapped the NC-17 rating but there's still a lot of sad stuff.

[Chris-chris]

I'm reading of Dragons and Angels and I like it. Though its rated PG-13, its all right. (I wish she'd get the next chapter in^^;;) I'm always carefull of what I read. I'm mostly looking for some good BoF fic though.

But, THANKIES EVERYONE!!:D :eek: :kissy:

[Chris-chris]

WAIT Mistress Weiila! WAIT!

All right everyone... befor this story goes into the archives, I need to know of any grammar or spelling errors that I missed. I keep going back and checking but I need you'll opoinos. KAY?:o

[wingnut]

Well, you know... battle scenes and all... I'm not saying I'm good at them either, mind you... *sighs*

[Weiila]

Are you satisfied with this, Chris? I'm working on the update, if you need more time you can always save it for next time.

[wingnut]

*still musing* They're not the most important thing, though... I knew there was a good reason I didn't like Lord of the Rings.
... Okay, you can throw tomatoes at me now. *cowers*

[Chris-chris]

Well, if you can point out even the smallest of spelling tell me.

Wingnut, I don't know how to fix the battle's... I have no other way... sorry.

BtW, I found the original copy! I looked back at it and boy! It was way worse than this!

edit: Go ahead. Put it in the Archieves!!!:D

[Wilfredo Martinez]

CC: Well, I'm glad you're still posting here. Getting advice as you go along is better than in big chunks; besides I think that writing regularly will help take your mind off the things you are having to deal with these days.

Yes, spelling is still your major problem, but again, if you get a good spellchecker you can solve it.

MY major problem with the story is that- I haven't played BoF II yet! But don't worry, I will do so soon! (Oh, and spoilers do NOT bother me, so I CAN read your story, don't worry!)

And yeah, BoF III had the BEST Dragon-Form system of all. In fact, it IS my all-time favorite game, and I'm currently replaying it! (which is why I recognize Ryu's Flame Dragon form as your new avatar! Good, but I miss the cat-girl. ^^ )

Keep up the good work, CC! (More comments after I read the story more carefully- I'm kinda busy these days!)

[Chris-chris]

Thank you Wilfredo, your words means a lot to me. I'll get my self back to normal in a minute. ;P

[Weiila]

If you want to, I can spellcheck it for you before I put it up, but then I'll just post the final result. Exam's coming up on Saturday and I'm starting to feel stressed to get the update done before that :P

[Chris-chris]

Just relax Weiila, Get those exams over with then worry about updates, Kay? thank you.

[Weiila]

Nah, I want to get the update done so that I won't have to think about it during the exam week. I'll have enough troubles since I have work training scheduled on four days that week. I thought it would only be two *grumbles* Oh well, if there's a will there's a way... or despair... or as my old roommate Anna said: "You can do anything with will, violence and vaseline!"
Don't ask.
... she also said that if you don't say "thanks!" after somebody said "bless you" when sneezing, a gnome will die. So... :)

Anyway, your fic and Gallo's are the last ones I have to fix up for the update. I always take Gallo's last since I never know when he'll update again, thus I save him for the last minute :)

[Chris-chris]

Thankies Misstress Weiila!!:D I see it in the arechives! THANKIES!!!:D :D :hyperven:

[Weiila]

No problem, Chris :-)