Sprite Comic: Ruin Raiders

[Doc Shinryuu]

Hey, all. Doc Shinryuu here. Wheee! My first post since the Worm! *ahem* Anyway, this is my sprite comic: Ruin Raiders.

#001: Hey, rather than be rude... (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders001.gif)
#002: Yeah, so I'm lazy. (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders002.gif)
#003: Gyoro's intro -or- Gyoro's an idiot (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders003.gif)
#003 Blooper: Note to self- NEVER let Gyoro use Arc Impulse indoors. (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders003Blooper.jpg)
#004: Ururun's intro -or- The obvious has been stated! (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders004.gif)
#005: Took me long enough! (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders005.gif)
#006: The first storyline begins -or- Murphy's Law strikes! (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders006.gif)
#007: Like you didn't see that coming a mile off. (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders007.gif)
#008: Doc isn't a morning person. (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders008.gif)
#009: Gyoro isn't going to live much longer if he keeps this up (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders009.gif)
#010: URURUN'S SECOND APPEARANCE! -or- Keep an eye on the background (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders010.gif)
#011: The first job of the storyline -or- Watch the background again (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders011.gif)
#012: Gyoro falls for his own trick (http://members.aol.com/kuswil/RuinRaiders012.gif)

Well, there you go. Read, laugh, comment.

[Jango]

Read...yes.
Laugh...no.
Comment...bad.

[Cless Alvein]

The sprite work's fine, but I really don't get any of the jokes.

[Charlemagne]

You know what I like about that comic? All the text is in the bubbles. And all the sprites don't have a grainy white outline.* Kudoz to you!






*I'm making fun of Sephiroths comic.

[Valkyrie Esker]

Eh, it's okay, I guess.

[Weiila]

I like irony, so I especially liked the first two comics. It has potential, you could work a little with the backgrounds though. They're kinda bland.

[postbagboy]

you should get sprites that have opening mouths. darnit. :suckah:

and #010's Editted sprite of Zero looks strangely like a 32-bit-version of my sprite i use on Old Timer.

[Doc Shinryuu]

:p I think the mouths look fine, thank you.

*checks Old Timer* Eep! No similarities intended, I swear! ^o^;

[Frameskip]

Not horrible, not great. Reminded me of Bob and George.

[Gilgamesh]

Its good, but the blooper doesn't work.

[Jango]

*I'm making fun of Sephiroths comic.


Yeah, aren't Seph's comics GREAT? Ok no...no they aren't...those comics would want to make the Dirty whore known as Satan want to reform.